Definition Peer Review

This peer review wasn't as helpful as the last peer review at Irving's just because I think having multiple people comment on your paper can give you more views and insights as to why your paper is bad. Also the out of class time that irving's allowed us to have was beneficial. Someone might pick up on stylistic errors while another contextual errors. I actually thought this week in class was more beneficial than the peer review. I don't know if it was because Josh did a good job at clearing up what the heck the paper was supposed to actually be or if it was because of the way he taught the style and sentence structure. I found it way easier to write a coherent paper that flows with clear and concise sentences after the in class discussion. I think it would be more beneficial during the peer review to have yourself read over the paper now that we are more knowledgeable, during class, and then if we have time left after we finish have a peer or two read it and see if they have anything to add.